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Essay Writing Samples For Competitive Exams 2017

Dear Aspirants,

Writing skills are an important part of communication and Descriptive Test (of English Language) will test your writing skills, understanding, analysing and summerising skills. Learning how to write essays and letters can be one of the drearier experiences for students, but it is also one of the most important. It puts all your knowledge of language and General Awareness to Test. By working on your writing skills you will become more capable of analyzing data, interpreting data, and thinking critically. This year IBPS has also re-introduced Descriptive Test in the Mains Examination of Probationary Officer Recruitment, so you must not take this test lightly as Descriptive Writing Test is of equal importance as the objective test for IBPS PO Mains Aspirants.

What can be the key to effective writing to score in Descriptive Section of IBPS Exam?


  • Reading- The more you'll read the more it will become easier for you to express opinions, ideas, and facts in a proper manner. Reading is essential to effective writing.
  • Grammar, Spellings, and Punctuation- Take them seriously!! There will be a deduction of marks in case you trip on these three. 
  • Brush up your knowledge of Current Affairs- There is a high possibility that you'll face a question from one of the trending topics in news, so always stay updated.

LETTER WRITING

In recent competitive exams, we’ve seen letter to the editor and informal letters were the hot topics asked in the descriptive paper. While writing a letter one should keep in mind to write letters that get your message across without the reader calling you for clarification. Letters shouldn't be verbose and usually, in competitive exams, there is a prescribed word limit.

Here is an example of Formal Letter Writing:

Q. Write a letter to the SHO of your area complaining against the violation of traffic rules by the people. (WORD LIMIT- 150)

17-B, Sadar,
Nagpur

24th August 2017

The SHO,
Sadar, Nagpur,
Maharashtra

Sir,

I wish to draw your kind attention towards the increasing incidents of road accidents in our area. The major cause of such incidents is the violation of traffic rules and absence of traffic police on signals. People are in a habit of breaking laws. Everybody on the road seems to be in a hurry.
It is very common that many people talk over mobile while drive and also jump red lights. Over speeding is another cause of road accidents. All these have contributed to the increase in the road accidents. Pedestrians do not feel safe while moving on the road.
It is, requested to take immediate necessary action to check the incidence of road accidents. Traffic police may be deployed on every street to punish those who dare to break the traffic rules.

Yours faithfully,
Imraan Malik


Try it Yourself | Important Letter Writing Topics for IBPS PO Mains

  • Write a letter to the editor of a newspaper regarding pollution in the festive season. (150 words)
  • You have ordered a digital camera online form a reputed company, but when the article was delivered you found that the article was not the same as you had ordered. Write a grievance redressal letter to the concerned company. (150 words)
  • Write a letter to your branch requesting them to transfer your savings account from Hari Nagar, Delhi branch to Gomti Nagar, Lucknow branch because of your transfer. (150 words)
  • Write a letter to your brother, expressing concern regarding use of social media and its impact on youth. (150 words)
  • Write a letter to your sister, asking her to be vigilant of her online presence and be aware of the online epidemic of ransomware   (150 words)


ESSAY WRITING

An Essay broadly consist of three part:

1) Introduction
2) Body
3) Conclusion

Introduction : Introduction is one of the most important part of your essay that can either leave a good or bad impression on the reader. And remember, if you get a grip on it then rest won't matter much. Suppose if "Beti Bachao, Beti Padhao" is given as topic then to introduce the essay, you need to be aware of the motive and the essence behind the scheme.

Active voice, wherein the subjects direct actions rather than let the actions "happen to" them – "he scored a 99%" instead of "he was given a 99%" – is a much more powerful and attention-grabbing way to write. At the same time, unless it is a personal narrative, avoid personal pronouns like I, My, or Me. Try instead to be more general and you will have your reader hooked.

Body : Once the introduction part is over then you have to include bits and pieces of the topic. It can include anything and while writing the body, you have to be careful about the facts and figures. That doesn't mean that it has to be accurate but you can use the approximate figures. For the first body paragraph you should use your strongest argument or most significant example unless some other more obvious beginning point (as in the case of chronological explanations) is required. The first sentence of this paragraph should be the topic sentence of the paragraph that directly relates to the examples listed in the mini-outline of introductory paragraph.

When you present facts in the essay, it shows how aware you are of the surrounding world. And also it looks good.

Conclusion : Conclusion is the part that includes the summary and things that can be improved. As the final paragraph is represents your last chance to make your case and, as such, should follow an extremely rigid format. You can read various examples of Essay and you can observe certain points because the conclusion part is very common and you can pick certain ready made points. But be careful while using them in your essay.


Here is an example of Essay Writing: Write an essay on the Blue Whale Challenge: Targeting Psychology of vulnerable minds in 200 words.


Blue Whale Challenge: Targeting Psychology of vulnerable minds 



"Blue Whale Challenge" that was initially a sensationalized hoax, is now believed to have had instances of mimetic self-harming and mimicking groups, leaving immature teenagers at risk of cyberbullying and online shaming. Blue Whale is explained as being based on the relationship between participants (or challengers) and administrators. The administrators command a series of missions that players must accomplish, usually one per day, some of which involve self-mutilation.

The Blue Whale challenge is an online game that pushes teens to commit suicide. Over the past month, a dozen teen deaths have been associated with the game in India and many more across the world. There is need to move discourse from the cause, to address the fundamental mental health vulnerabilities that are getting these kids manipulated by an administrator who slowly works on stimulating dormant suicide ideation in someone with depression.

We need a discourse on depression but to do that, there is a necessity to de-hyphenate anxiety from psychosis. We can’t wait for authorities or government to provide solutions, each of us has to do our part to promote better mental well-being in whatever approach possible.

Try it Yourself | Important Essay Writing Topics for IBPS PO Mains

  • Write an essay on merits and demerits of cryptocurrency. (150 words)
  • Write an Essay on India-China Border Disputes - What is the Doklam Issue? (200 words)
  • Write an Essay on Godmen- A Threat to Indian Society (150 words).
  • Write an essay on advantages and disadvantages of NEET. (150 words)
  • Write an Essay on Prompt Corrective Action taken by RBI (250 words).  
  • Write an Essay on Right to Privacy: Fundamental Right. (150 words)
  • Write an essay on Myanmar's Rohingya Refugee Crisis. (200 words)
  • Write an essay on Is Digital Banking a curse to human engagement/ employment?
  • Demonetisation in 2016 gave a boost to internet banking, mobile wallets etc. Write an essay in 150 words on the topic- Can India go Cashless? (200 words)


We are providing our readers with the 2nd edition of A Guide to Descriptive Writing eBook where we've covered essays and letters on many important current affairs based topics of last 4-5 months. You can get the Descriptive Writing ebook from store.adda247 for a nominal price of 199/-. You’ll get solved examples of essays on most frequently asked topics like Demonetisation, Caste Based Reservation in India, Climate Catastrophe, Social Media etc. and Current Affairs based trending topics like Doklam Issue, Blue Whale Challenge, World War-III, Cryptocurrency, Right to Privacy, Prompt Corrective Action, Bullet Train, Can India go Cashless?, Challenges After GST Implementation etc.

Through this ebook you can also learn key point and write an essay on insurance and Banking related topics like Financial Inclusion, Merger of banks, Insurance Penetration etc. To help you understand the art and pattern of letter writing we have included tips and letter writing aids of both Formal and Informal Letter separately, along with solved examples of Letter to Editor, Complaint Letter, Grievance Redressal Letter, Formal Invitation etc. in Formal Letter Category and Personal Letter/ Expression of Concern, Condolence Letter, Informal Invitation, Letter of Congratulations, Thank You Letter/ Gratitude Expression etc. in the Informal Letter Category. You must attempt to write essays and letters on the questions of this practice exercise as this will not only help you test your skills of essay writing but also will boost your confidence.


          





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The SBI PO Main Paper is around the corner. You must be prepared by now with your syllabus for the Main Paper. The best help for you at this time must be actual letter samples for SBI PO Mains, which will give you an exact idea of what to write in the descriptive paper.

 

Points to Remember when tackling Letter Writing:

  1. Decide: Are you more comfortable with Informal Letters or Formal Letters? Formal letters have a set structure and you can limit it to the subject at hand. Informal letters flow more easily and you have more flexibility in controlling the content of the letter. You will likely be given a choice between two or three subjects – one might even be an informal letter. So choose your subject well.
  2. Stick to Format:Follow the standard format in letter writing. Each letter simply must have the following parts in order.
  • Your (Fake) Address
  • Today’s Date
  • Subject (There is no need for a subject in an informal letter)
  • Salutations (e.g. ‘My Dearest Sister’, ‘Dear Sir’ or simply ‘Madam’ etc.)
  • Introductory Paragraph, Body (dealing with the subject of the letter), Concluding Paragraph
  • Sign off/ Complimentary Closing
  • Your (Fake) Name (and Designation where necessary)
  1. Word Limit:Keep the subject in mind when writing the letter. You definitely have a time limit and will likely also have a word limit, so don’t wander off topic.
  2. Letter Body:The body must cover the entirety of the subject that has been given in the question. The introduction should introduce who you are and why you are writing this letter. The conclusion should be a polite but firm call to action.
  3. How to End: The sign off or complimentary closing must be appropriate. “Yours affectionately” may be appropriate for a personal letter but not for a formal one. “Yours sincerely” or “Yours truly” would be apter for formal letters.
  4. Salutation: If you know who you are writing to, make sure your salutations are gender appropriate. Else, you can just say “Sir”.
  5. Golden rule for Formal letters: Keep the formal letters as respectful as possible, even if you are complaining.

Here are some sample letters for you to get an idea. You can follow either of the formats for the formal letter…

Letter Samples for SBI PO Mains Descriptive Paper

1. Informal Letter Samples for SBI PO Mains

  1. Write an Informal Letter to your mother in about 300 words telling her of your achievements in college.

 

A-607, Hillcrest,

Andheri,

Mumbai-400008.

22nd July 2015.

 

Dear mother,

I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirits. I am writing this letter to you to tell you about my achievements at the college this year.

This year has been one of the most eventful years of my life. In the first month of college itself, I was elected as the class representative for the year. My classmates and teachers believed that my responsible and humble demeanour made me the perfect choice for this position. This was just the beginning. Once college began full swing, I became as busy as a bee.

My next successful endeavour was being a part of the organising committee of Mumbai’s largest college festival – Unnati. I participated in the organisation of this event in the capacity of the President of the entire organising team. Managing a multitude of people and ensuring that all that was planned was executed effectively almost took a toll on my physical and mental health. However, the satisfaction of its fruition was unparalleled. Besides this, I took part in a variety of conferences to realise my public speaking potential. Being awarded the ‘Best Speaker’ at several of these symposiums instilled a huge load of confidence in me. Academically, too, I have been working hard and I managed to achieve a position among the top three ranks in each semester. I do not think that this would be possible without the constant support of my teachers and friends who helped me cover up the classes I missed so often.

After such a tiring but fulfilling college year, I will be coming home over the summer break. I have been missing Papa, you and Vedika a lot and hope to see you soon!

Yours lovingly,
Sanaya.


2. Formal Letter Samples for SBI PO Mains

  1. Write a Formal Letter to your Municipal Corporation in about 300 words complaining about the state of roads in your area and the lack of street lights there.

B-515, Royal Ensign,                                                                  Sector-64, Ashok Vihar,  New Delhi, Delhi – 110052.        23rd July 2015

 

To,
Mr K. K. Dahiya
Director (Personnel) – South Delhi Municipal Corporation (SDMC)
Palika Bazar, Connaught Place
New Delhi, Delhi -110056

SUBJECT: POOR CONDITION OF ROADS AND LACK OF STREET LIGHTS IN ASHOK VIHAR

Sir,

I, Ankita Vasudha, am a resident of Ashok Vihar. This letter is to draw the attention of the SDMC to the pathetic condition of roads in Ashok Vihar.  The stretch between sector 64 and sector 125 has been in a very poor state since the last 6 months. This stretch, which is one of the busiest roads in New Delhi, also lacks street lighting.

The onset of the monsoon has only worsened the situation. There are huge potholes on this road which along with zero maintenance of this stretch leads to huge traffic jams during the peak hours. Needless to say, the damage it causes to the vehicles plying on this road is costing the citizens heavily. Almost every other day, a vehicle is punctured or dented or it gets stuck. Lack of proper lighting only adds to the misery of the people. The number of accidents occurring here has also gone up significantly.

Further, it has become very difficult for the pedestrians to walk along this road due to the fact that the vehicles including company buses, cabs and cars tend to avoid the potholes and drive along the sides of the roads, where pedestrians tend to walk because of the lack of proper footpaths.

These conditions have caused a lot of inconvenience to the residents of this area as well as commuters.

Keeping the above in view, I hope that the SDMC will initiate expeditious steps to ensure the repairing of this road with proper lighting.

Thanking you.

Yours faithfully,
Ankita Vasudha.

2. Write a Formal Letter to the Principal requesting him to increase security for women in the college.

From,
Sanaya Sinha,
A-650, Hillcrest,
Aahat Enclave, Andheri,
Mumbai-400008.
22nd July 2015.

To,
The Principal, St. Xavier’s College,
Churchgate,
Mumbai-400002.

Subject: Request for increasing security for women in college

Dear Sir,

I, the undersigned, am writing this letter to you to request you to hike the security for women in the college. I am a student of your institution and am pursuing Economics. I am voicing out such a concern on behalf of all the other female students of the college.

Given the current scenario in the Indian diaspora and numerous untoward incidents that are being reported almost daily, I believe that women’s security is an issue that needs to be tackled effectively at the earliest. Most of the female students in the campus travel from faraway suburban areas and often stay back in the college campus even after the lectures are over because they participate in a wide range of extra-curricular activities. As such, it is imperative that the surveillance be increased for women in the college lest we face undesirable consequences.

This is why I earnestly request you to take some action as soon as possible. I would be highly obliged if you would do the needful and heighten the security in and around the college campus for all the females. I thank you in anticipation.

Yours truly,
Sanaya Sinha.

Follow these rules and these samples to ace your SBI PO 2017 exam. Best of luck!

If you liked these Samples for SBI PO Mains and are looking for Essay writing tips, you can find the links here.

Sample Essays for descriptive Paper – Part I

Sample Essays for descriptive Paper – Part II

Your descriptive paper will be evaluated only if you clear the objective stage of the SBI PO Mains. So make sure you start your preparation now!